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Click hereI am forced beneath you
Muffled moans
And whimpers
Against your
Hard pressed kiss
Amidst
These animal cries
I wish for a moment
To shiver quietly
In this
Generous anguish
My violation
Is yours
As your fingers intertwine
Amidst my raven locks
And as my gaze
Is forced
To lock with yours
The utter desperation
Will overcome
Joyful to the eye
- July, 2001
...quite liked this, from 'hard pressed kiss' to 'my violation is yours'
are simply not good, but I think you did quite well this.
*no thermometer rating