Amante XI

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Part 11 of the 15 part series

Updated 05/12/2022
Created 06/22/2004
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What is self, Amante? Let me know your hands
on supple skin and the heat of bidden breath.
Usted tiene mis palabras, submerged strands

of want, desire lifetimes deep. No earthly death
can quench the thirst unbottled here again
on supple skin. And the heat of bidden breath,

surmounting moments unknown now or then,
still elemental, felt within an artful phrase,
can quench the thirst unbottled here again

if it can be, and shades of mores are to raise
reluctant fingers, seeking soul hid in a face
still elemental, felt within an artful phrase.

Poems are imprints. Art can weave the trace
with near forgotten kisses whisperingtouch
reluctant fingers, seeking soul hid in a face

that never spoke to me and yet said much.
What of self, Amante, can I give your hands
with near forgotten kisses whisperingtouch?
Usted tiene mis palabras, submerged strands.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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LiarLiarover 19 years ago
You're reviewed

This poem has been mentioned in the New Poems review thread over at the forum.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
the tenderness

and want drips from this.

These poems always change my consciousness when I read them.

for 3 or 4 minutes...my whole thought process is slowed and I smile and drift into memories.

It is magical writing

Thank you

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