- Erotic Poetry
- half stop
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Click hereHer toy
of the moment
reminded me of a comma.
She said that it was curved
just that way,
with a special knob,
to make her sing
in the key of 'G.'
- COMMENTS
RhymeFairyabout 17 years agoThinking on what Eve said, maybe it's a bit redundant? I love the poem, very very hot and erotic. The "sing G" worked ok, maybe a bit of an overkill as opposed to leaving it in the air, as something one just knows this girl can do, given the poem in it's enteritity.
You know erotic and I love it ~ you got my 5 ~~
WickedEveabout 17 years agoI like the description of the shape: comma. Very original. The only lines that don't make me want to sing:
to make her sing
in the key of 'G.'
