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Click hereThe recipe's simple, just one part lust,
let the cock leaven to a swollen tusk,
then knead it and churn until it combusts.
Makes one silken serving of salted musk.
And to describe these curds of manhood spilt?
Like oil from a sweetgum's bitter roots.
Like vicious cascades of bullets of milk.
Likecol pugnonotes from a baritone flute.
Like a melange of melted ice cream and earth.
Like a navel full of candied fairy dung.
Like ambrosia scavenged from a dumpster
out back, still fresh enough for a savage tongue,
like the one which on your own parched lips is set.
Lend me those lips, and I'll return them wet.
about the words, what you are doing at the front end is interesting. Now why did you break the rhyme scheme. Also the poem uses heavy end stop rhyme, one enjambement
Like ambrosia scavenged from a dumpster <
out back,
S3 is a pattern like..like..like
S2 the reverse, why?
Suppose you have set up S2 exactly like S3,
like... like... lke...enjamb
just something to consider
5ed
I can tell you from experience, this is gross, as any one on latrine duty in the Middle World can tell you. Try the river lobster instead. Nice Poem.
Whoa. I'm reeling from sensory overload - and the fact that you managed to fit gems like these:
A navel full of candied fairy dung !!!!
Ambrosia salvaged from a dumpster
into a sonnet. Unquestioned 5, smart, unexpected..and gross. In a nice way.