All Comments on 'Carnal Knowledge Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
question

How soon can we get the next chapter? A month seems too long, I enjoy this story so much but I want her to have some fun with the gardeners son haha :)

elisebeeelisebeeover 9 years ago
Take all of the time you need or want

This story is a gift and so is your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Thanks!

I love, love, love your story and your writing! Your update felt like an early Christmas present:) The dialogue at the dress fitting is such a delight.

kris10ekris10eover 9 years ago
WHY! !

How could you just stop there.... I would have loved more, especially given your farely long delays I am truly enjoying this series and hate to seem so impatient, but please find a way to post chapter 9 sooner than its predecessors. Smile. Thank you again for such a delightful read I am in with Rockdale. He has met his match and hopefully his better half(in time). We haven't seen his true scandalous ways. Lol I do hope Eliza can handle him or maybe John suits her better, sometimes we can't always have what we want when we want it. Kisses

bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago

And the games continue.....loved this chapter. Although it always amazes me how many women, in stories and real life, don't just tell the raping bastards to go to hell and just meekly assume what they spout is correct, that no one will believe them. A well done chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Slightly miffed that we didn't get any raunchy details between the two in this chapter

but judging by the way you ended this, I'm guessing we'll be getting a steamy scene or two in the next one. Can't wait!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Dying.

As usual your writing was excellent, but I can't stress how much it breaks my heart that it was so short. I check on this site EVERY DAY for an update. The idea of waiting another month and more for the next chaper is torture. Awww, but you're writing. So creative, sexy, and fresh. Please, please continue- and soon! I also would like to suggest please if you can stretch out the details. Sometimes I feel like you suddenly skip to the next part of a scene so quickly, maybe something more in the transitions? Also more detail in the sex scenes to be blunt, lol. Thank you for posting this chaper!! Highly awaited and so, so eager for more!!- Adrienne

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More please- soon!!!!!!

Love this entire story- please keep writing!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Please update soon

I check this series everyday waiting for an update. I hope to see Eliza abd the earl getting together soon and realize how they feel for each other. Screw Lydia and george!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Bruising?

I wonder if she has any marks from the evil George's manhandling of her? If so I hope that incenses Rockdale and he gives his footman the boot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Oh, I just adore this story!

It has a lot of humour in it and I love Eliza and Rockdale! I'm so glad I glanced upon this update quickly. Obviously you are the writer and can update at your 'leisure', as you rightly should, but I would LOVE it was sooner rather than later..... *pretty please?*

dolcezza4dolcezza4over 9 years ago
Love it!

Like all the other commentators, I check for this almost every day! I can't wait to see the next chapter (soon hopefully?!). I like the idea of Eliza having marks on her or something that makes Rockdale privy to what George has done to her. Would love to see him get the boot and to see how it infuriates Rockdale! Keep up the great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love it

This is absolutely one of my fav series!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More more more NOW

MOOOORREEEEE NOW. I check daily even though you post monthly. Why do you hate me, oh writer? MORE NOW

jrj8jrj8over 9 years ago
Encore...

What everyone else is saying about your wonderful skill and story... with a cherry on top..! Thank you for brightening my days..

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
awesome story

Hehehe is cute wen she is pissed he reacts so cutely

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Some time alone and a masquerade? I can't wait for the next chapter, that sounds like a setup for a deliciously good time

mystical_penguinmystical_penguinover 9 years ago
he is cute

he mouths the word nefarious cur..super sweet he is towards her .. There bantering is quiet interesting nd his jealousy is adorable

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Month

It's alredy been a month 😢 Anticipation is killing me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I love this story! Exactly what I was looking for, and its exactly what I want it to be!! Sweet and sexy and a little drama-angsty-"maybe" they're falling in love! Can't wait for more!!

jls152jls152almost 9 years ago
Exciting drama

Heck of a good yarn. Great style, reads so authentically for the period, and nicely seasoned with erotica.

spearishspearishover 8 years ago
Published ?

Surely your a published author ? If not ,you need to be .I need to read more of your work .Best historical I've read this year .I love the depth of your characters .The repartee between Eliza and William is wonderful :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love love love this!

I just started reading this story a couple of nights ago (trying to stretch it out because I don't want it to end) but I'm halfway done and already sad that soon I'll have to wait for the next piece. Please keep writing. You are so talented!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Hated George Character.

Why the hell you did you introduce an uncomfortable character like George. Hated that part but everything else was fine.

Comentarista82Comentarista82almost 7 years ago
On pins and needles!

I'm SO glad you wrote Eliza getting away from George, with Rockdale also seeing she moved away from his secretary Willoughby when he kept stepping toward her. Of course, I really wonder how you will resolve George and his mother's scheming--he disgusts me too--and obviously the apple doesn't fall far from the tree.

Love their banter at the end, plus how you painted their interaction while Bissette fitted her and when he laughed, then kissing her tenderly. He's softening and I love it. :) 5

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Lovely

Naisu

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Please update us when your book gets published :)

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

The waiting for the next installment on this one was terrible lol. Your writing and character building is just magnificent.

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On again, off again writer of smutty romance. I’m sorry Carnal Knowledge isn’t finished. Maybe someday.

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