All Comments on 'Sibling Revival-ry Ch. 01'

Is this a repost? I'm sure is isn't plagiarized, right?

but you'd have to be an octopus to record the described video episode by N.

Loved it....how about some more

Now you need to add some more chapters

I only gave this a 5 because that's as high as the rating scale goes. Very nice scenario; good development from sibling disdain, to detente to friendship to intimacy. Nothing too fast. Don't like the 9-inch package because that's just caricature. Nice teaser at the end. Hope you're working on the second chapter even now!

Hi

"andsguy" I agree, I do seem to recall a very very simular story from some time back. Still either way a good read that could be developed further.

Are you kidding me? There are over 32000 stories in this category alone... You don't think there might be some overlap. Or was I supposed to read all 32000 beforehand, to eliminate any possible duplication.

I guess everyone after the Wright Brothers plagiarized the airplane, too.

The first page was EXTREMELY familiar. Hated, beautiful older sister, hostility that started when the boy professed his love for her as a 5 year old. Sister's hidden desires. Brother brings girl home for sex and sister walking in on him and makes a threat to tell parents. Brother tackles sister an gets kissed steamily by her right out of the blue. He's shocked, she runs away. That a whole lot of coincidences. Maybe you can understand my and another readers questioning the origin of your story?

It's all to common for writers to include similar scenarios from countless other stories posted here. In fact, it happens far too often. Many stories are simply boilerplate formulas.

I just read a story called Double Exposure by Scribleskilz that was highly original and reminiscent of nothing I've ever read. Top notch work from my new favorite author.

Awesome! MORE!!!!!!!!!!

One of the horniest stories I've seen on here for months, time to clean up now, lol

new under the sun...but damn good reading anyways - thanks

A very HOT story and brother / sister relationship ! You have to go to the next level now...... I think Natalie would pass out if her brother screwed her and they would become bonded another way. Cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you.

Gave it four stars for the story because it was hot, almost three stars because of the nine inch cock and the DD tits, the story would still been hot without them.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

This story got me so wet!

That is a great start ....

Enjoyed this, great job. I do agree with the DD & 9" comment, but the narative is solid. Keep at it, I will be back to read the rest.

Damn Good Writting!

But it definitely needs an fith and sixth chapter!!!

Lol. Well done!!

Comical yet hot. I lost my shit at the hot gluing the phone to the ceiling. Cant wait for the next chapter.

A great story leaves a lot to the imagination and should help with the story line if you want to continue with an other chapter

Great writing. Funny, sexy, and good story. Can't wait for the next chapters!

Title says it all.

Wonderful, witty and woefully HOT! Great new start and looking forward to the next in the series!

This story hit all of the wickets: funny, engaging, and sexual gratification. Looking forward to the next chapter.

It's so pathetic when guys with no experience with women write stories. For starters most chicks don't like huge dicks because it will hurt them. Two if you've ever been with a woman and made her cum, you'd know that when they have an orgasm they are energized and want more. They never say "An orgasm like that takes a lot out of a girl." I didnt' waste my time reading this crap story. I skimmed through most of it.

Sigh.... It pains me when people make a comment like the previous post, and hide under the anonymous label. This person is obviously the ultimate expert in all things female and orgasmic, and we should all bow to their opinion. I admit that big dicks can hurt a woman, especially if the guy doesn't care to be gentle. As for the fatigue factor after an orgasm, I personally have seen both reactions from the same woman. It depends on a lot of things. I humbly suggest that if you find the program unbelievable, you merely change the channel, and not be insulting and abusive.

To those of you who have offered constructive criticism or encouragement, my sincere thanks.

so delicious! I can't wait 'til many more chapters!

It's so awesome when guys with plenty of experience with women write stories. For starters most chicks like huge dicks because it will feel awesome. Two if you've ever been with a woman and made her cum, you'd know that when they have an orgasm they are in their most weakened state. This is the perfect time to capture them with a pokeball. I didn't waste any more time not reading this awesome story. I barely looked away through most of it.

Ha ha ha. Nice one. Not familiar with a pokeball, but appreciate the sentiment.

I'd love a part 2! Keep 'em cummin!

excellent work! well done! Next please!

Being that I am a woman, I have given myself all sorts of different orgasms. Orgasms that leave me wanting more, and especially, orgasms that exhaust me after the very first one. I can get exhausted to the point where I can't even work myself UP to another orgasm. Every woman is different. And every experience is different. A woman won't want a million orgasms all the time. Lots of times, one orgasm is good enough, especially if worked at the right way. If you're a woman, you should already know that. But because you obviously don't, I'm sure you're just a guy with little to no experience in female orgasms, otherwise you wouldn't have posted a completely ignorant comment like that.

Being an older white male, I have to say that there must be something wrong with you. I have never met another white male who is into watching videos of black cock and white women, yet you state as they are your favorite! Are you gay and secretly dreaming about your sister fucking a black cock so you can clean it for her. Your sick if you think this adds to the story, it does not.

First, it's a story, you jackass. Given that most men like to keep their actual desires to themselves, I'd question how you know what your 'friends' likes and dislikes are. Second, I don't even have a sister, and I'm not gay, but you might be.... See above for reasons

Also 'your' is possessive. 'You're' is the contractive form of you are. It's called English, you should try it sometime.

In the future, should you find one of my stories not to your liking, I humbly suggest that you merely stop reading, put your dick away, and find a story that fits a mind as small as yours.

Absolutely sublime best story I have ever read I must admit it was a tad

short however but nonetheless the best by far

What the hell brought out all these trolls??????????????????????? Did you shoot someone's sister or something? I thought the story was well above average and I gave it 5 stars and I'm on my way to read the other chapters!

I just finished reading the first story, and while a few spots in it seemed rushed or not realistic, as a whole the story was well done. The length of the story wasn't absurdly short, which is nice to have with incest stories. Since I don't know how you plan for the series to go, I'll refrain from saying what I'd like to see happen. I give this story a 6/10 on my personal scale, meaning it's better than the majority of the junk on here.

Loved it wish it was longer

Isn't it interesting, though, how the most negative people are the Anons too afraid to show their name, or too afraid to create an account to have a name to share? I still struggle with them myself, but I'm learning to either ignore or delete their asinine comments. Don't listen to them and keep writing; you're one of the better ones out there. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and to checking out what else you've written.

Why do so many idiots today think the girls have to have DD tits and they have the world's biggest cock? Try climbing out of your video game world and take a look at real people. You might find most women have normal tits and guys like you have below average sized cocks.

GET REAL or stop polluting this site with your garbage!!!!

This garbage story only deserves a one. Too bad I can't give a lower number.

How interesting that you, the latest Anonymous posting troll, should post your comment immediately after someone who a) had a differing opinion and b) had the courage to actually take the responsibility for that opinion with their name attached. That person suggested that I merely delete your comment, but I'm going to let it stand, because I have one of my own for YOU.

Notice my name? If you have a problem with my words you'll know who to contact.

First, I believe it's called fantasy for a reason. Second, did you even READ THE STORY? Mom is more endowed than average, and her daughter inherited that attribute. According to you, in the real world that never happens. Talk about opening your eyes. The male character is above average in height and weight, especially for an eighteen year old. According to you, the expert, all men have the same size dick (except yours, of course), so bigger guys don't have bigger equipment. Look up the definition of 'average', you dolt. Some bigger, some smaller, the data 'averages'out, hence the term.

I personally haven't played video games in about twenty years. I live in the real world, where I happen to be about 6'6", and weigh 230. My wife, the proud owner of a pair of DD breasts, is at my side. I work in an office environment, where there are women with all different sizes of breasts, including at least 3 ladies who are much, much larger than my wife. But none of that's real, right, oh Oracle of the world?

I'm not going to waste my breath on the dick size comment.

There. I've left your comment posted. Don't you feel powerful?

To my other readers, thank you for your support and encouragement.

Great story and buildup.

Great build up; terrific description of siblings relationship. I loved it. It's one of the better stories and I'm so looking forward to reading part 2!! Really good writing!!

Honestly, I loved your first chapter I gave it a 5. I really doubt the comments of plaigerism. However, I was very impressed with the passion you displayed towards ignorant people. That was a 6!

Absolutely spectacular

one fantastic story. thank you for writing it

Awesome story!! ...but, i.m.h.o., any guy with a smoking hot sister that wants to fuck him *never* really has any problem morally with the incest thing, lol, it just exists to shit up perfectly good stories! Lol ;). ...other than worrying abt getting caught or getting her pregnant, wouldnt bat an eye!

Your response to anon;

”--- I work in an office environment, where there are women with all different sizes of breasts, including at least 3 ladies who are much, much larger than my wife. ---“

Do any of your co-workers know you and read your stories?

How’s the office environment now?

Is there some ‘fodder’ for an office thread?

I agree with Grocks2015 4/26/15 comments

Thankyou for taking the trouble to respond. Your responses also deserve a 5

Just thinking out loud. I enjoy your fantasy +++5+++

considering the subject thread, the security code was DD--

While I Normally don't comments or vote on stories, unless I really like them, I am on yours for more than one reason. For starters I gave your story a 5. It was funny and hot all at the same time. I love the banter of the brother and sister then it turning into other interest. And I also like the twist at the end, the unknown question. I will keep reading.

As for all these other asshats that are trolling on this story, Why are you even here? If you don't like it then move on to the next story that you can find and read that one. It's one thing for constructive criticism but it's another thing when you are just bashing. Seriously some women like big cock's some don't some women have big tits, ,me being one of those women my are larger then that in this story by far, some women don't. Some women get exhausted after a big orgasm some don't, some can have just one others need more. Every woman is different, every experience is different. If you have a man who knows what he is doing then they can give a woman a one time wonder orgasm and them be utterly spent, sometimes it takes us women to give ourselves that orgasm. So stop trolling on this story. It's good. Damn good

and heading towards chapter two. I want to see these kids crawl into bed together.

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My brain was short circuiting. I knew which way my dick was voting, but my other head was having a hard time with the whole 'incest is taboo' thing. Maybe I misunderstood her. Yes, that's what must have happened. A simple misunderstanding. Boy, I'm glad I figured that out. Could have been really embarrassing. Case closed.

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Haha, like he would even bat an eye in pause if she said she wanted to fuck him! Hell, im surprised he didnt jump her in the middle of their show! Lol.

Great Story!!! I'm not sure I could have just sat there while she did herself and I was doing myself!!!! LOL.....

amazingly written. nice build up...

I love that they were normal siblings in the beginning not the typical fairy tale bs. Well written. Will be reading more for sure.

Holy shit! Did the furnace kick on? It's really hot in here all of a sudden!

Oh wait, that's just me.

On to Chapter 2! ;-)

I hope that they will fuck in the next chapter and eventually he will do Mom. Good reading, thank you.

I love stories like this. The whole "we both want to, but shouldn't" is one my favorite scenarios. I love that they use loop holes to satisfy their needs. Please write more like this! Doesn't even have to be incest. Maybe girlfriends mother? Or neighbor or best friends wife? Very talented writer cant wait to read more!

I love finding hot series like this already done! Five stars!!

Had me hard the whole time, had to take care of it twice just in this chapter. You are one of my best writers here. Weldone 5 stars for you!

Wow that is a very hot story. I wish I could do that with my younger sister. I have wanted to watch her masterbate for many years. I was so hard and came so hard reading your story thinking about it being my sister and I. Thank you.

Can't wait for the next one ... Luckily I only have to wait long enough to change the towel ;) Thank you

This was awesome! Thank you for writing it!

Great start, looking forward to this story.

5/5

I know you had to condense it for the story, but the transition from not liking each other to wanting intimate contact was likely helped along by some needed maturity on both sides. That, and a big boobed luscious blonde can change almost any guys attitude! Ha. Good story

Not a fan of mutual masturbation. Not at all. What a waste.

Really liked it. Looking forward to them coming back.

Fantastic story, makes me think of....😈💋😨

Mutual masturbation is Ssssoool cool!! Just like this story...too bad "others" do not think so, and feel the need to express their 'negative vibes' to the rest of us (remember in the mo ie "Kelly's Heroes"...Donald Sutherland is always talking to others about their NEGATIVE VIBES...!!!)

**5**STARS...

9 inch cock, double D tits, overly attractive, yep it ticks all the standard overkill boxes for these kinds of stories. Not that I'm really complaining. It works for this story.

"Open the window. It smells like a brothel in here." All right I laughed. Hard. :D

A nine inch dick? How is it that every fucker in all of these stories has a nine inch dick especially when the average dick is no more than six inches. Come on guys make your stories half way believable and keep dick size at seven inches max. Most women can take an average size dick and if a guy try's to pound her with nine inch dick she would try to kick him off while he still had three inches hanging out of her pussy.