All Comments on 'Here Cums(?) The Bride'

I like shorter stories on here but they usually lack depth. This story was the most well written story out of any story I have read on here. The ending made it for me because I find it much better when it is a solid relationship vs cheating. Well Done.

love it

You totally had me and I loved it. I let an "old friend" see me naked on my wedding day but I refused to go any further with him though he begged me to. This one felt naughtier than that but I loved the twist.

Nice piece of flash fiction. Thanks!

It's a romantic story with a twist. I loved it. Maybe I will do the same with my wife.

well done