All Comments on 'Meredith Ch. 01'

If it was either of their first time, that fact somehow escaped me.

Many guys have hooked up with friend's sister. Usually not as fast but still works out.

Really? That's the story? Didn't soind like her first BJ, Was it his?

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Thanks for the feedback. I suppose I misinterpreted the First Time category. I thought it was appropriate considering that it was our first time together, but I see you guys point.

Definitely written by a man.

And I'm with everyone else, why is this in first time?

Can't wait for the rest of the story.

get ta writing and i'll be happy to read... so far pretty darn good

Keep going man I'll be watching for a completed work here that's both hot and romantic with that sense of realism that comes with feelings, rather than pure fantasy fictions this site has a lot of already.

In real life I hope you told her that if either of you were a bit braver in youth, this could've happened a whole lot sooner and not cheating boyfriend would've ever touched her heart or body.