by erotica881988
...to an excellent story! Somebody's a great writer! ;-)
Five stars!
I really hope that there will be a lot more chapters. I can envision a bounty of hot storries with Madison and Lawrence (and Gemma and..)
I really enjoy that you also have good (and did I mention hot?) conversation.
thanks for the nice feedback . It really makes me want to write more.
there are plenty of chapters to come and the story will continue not just sexually but I hope on an intellectual level as well.
I have the worlds best editor and this wouldn't be possible without him.
I love your writing style and characterisation.
Can't wait for the next installment
I know your bio says you're female, but it's hard to believe. You nailed great anal from the male perspective. I've thought about anal as being on a logarithmic scale: each inch in is 10 times more pleasurable than the last. Would you consider writing a chapter about the female experience of great anal? There is a book in that. You do have a great editor. These are quite polished, and Ch 4 is your best. I want to read more . . .
You really should write a story about anal intercourse from a woman's perspective. It saddens me that so many women are set against this exquisite form of lovemaking because of the inept, self-serving introduction to it they got from some immature guy. A woman who's learned to love anal, both giving and receiving, can accomplish anything!