by rockandroller
I ENJOYED THIS STORY FROM BEGINNING TO END. IT WAS WELL WRITTEN....
ive had personal incest experience ur story is so fucking hot all of your incest stories for that matter halfway trough your stories i have to stick my finger in my cunt because im so excited its always fun when a girl gets her pussy sucked and fucked by a male family member keep up the good work
I've read a lot of incest stories but this is the best one yet. It got me all kinds of hot and bothered. LOL. Excellent!!!
this submission leaves me with a wet oval of heat that I have no choice but to succumb to. Thanks for the mindblowing orgasms!
Thanks for sharing that story. I could picture myself as her and wanted and longed for everything in the story she did. I came almost everytime she did.......
It is unusual to find a different approach to the parent/child incest story and you have found a very interesting slant. And it was well written. I have read only one other of your contributions but I shall now go and read all of them, with great expectations of being thrilled and satisfied.
I enjoyed this immensely, I hope to read more of this writers efforts.
I've read a lot of incest stories but this is the best one I ever red.
its really hot. and made me cum all over.
i red it twice and cum twice. and i cum ( for both) before finising the story.
5thank u very much.
Well written and sooo damned sexy!!!!
More please...now please excuse me while I cum again and again......
I wanted it to keep going! I loved the way you worked up to the grande finale, you were genius in your teasings! What an erotic perspective. Your details of Dawn's emotions and feelings were believable. Reading this was as good as the first erotic story I ever read--just that hot and arousing! I would love to see a sequel to this, although I know this would be hard to beat. But please consider it! Thank you for this, it made my week!
That was the best story i have ever read, it got me so wet i just loved how oyu but Susan in there with her dad also i loved!!
I guess i am more of the type of forceful sex... the fact that the dad did not ravish her to her liking did not appeal to me.. but i love the fact that he fucked his dauther. mmmmmmm ... i wish my dad woul fuck me hard!
A special friend of mine recommend this story to me as her way of inviting me into her world of incest fantasy. Normally when I read stories I go straight for the quick dirty cum, but you showed me that lead-up and setting can be just as great. . . Im going to read some more of your work, now!
I really enjoyed this story. I loved the way she worked him into her little web of seduction. Thanks for the read. ~ Red
I adored your story and the slow build up of Dawn's seduction of her father. But the daddy should have sucked his girl's nipples and clit and made her cum before he fucked her. Then it would have been perfect.
Wow! What a well written story, it will be remembered by me for while to come. I think you have real talent. I think you might be going places. Thanks for a great story!
i loved everything but the ending was a big dissapoitment. i wanted more passion from her daddy and it didnt do it for me . i think you should re write the ending. but good story overall. tnks
ahhh...yes i am still cumming...keep fucking me daddy...uhhh....yes put you hot cum deep inside kari's pussy...yes!!! baby
Great buildup, wonderful writing and very intense. The only thing that could use improvement is the dialogue. The story's written from the daughter's POV, so dialogue from the father would increase tension and let the reader know what he's thinking. I had no idea what was going through his mind. I wanted to know how he felt about the whole situation and if he struggled with the decision to sleep with his daughter. A bit of verbal exchange between father and daughter would've really made the story for me. There was too much silence! Other than that, a very good read. Well done on a great story.
was it made me come just too damn fast. i couldnt even get past first page before it was too late. i dream every night of my daddy fucking me. i wish he knew its what i wanted
I loved the build up and the ending was great. For some reason, the thought of Daddy coming to my room late at night is really hot. I love that it's so hot and nasty. Yummy.
I have fantasized this with my stepdad too. I tease him all the time hoping to get him so turned on he will take me. Im stacy18bi@Hotmail. Hit me up...daddy
I enjoyed the buildup of tension and the way you straddled innocence and desire. Well written!
i remember the first night i fucked my daughter she was 20 we'd been out to dinner and just having a good time went back to the house she looked at me said dad by chance would you oblidge me by fucking the daylights out of me....have been now for 10 years.
It was a realy good story , except one important thing, and that is there was no dialog from the father until the end . That was to me very frustrating.
Jerry B
What missing dialogue? What could he have possibly said to make this story hotter??? I loved the story element where neither she nor the reader KNOWS if he is even aware of her incestuous longings. By the end, we all know. He put it on her. He wore her down.
I would love to read more like this how much better could sex be then this be,all I could think about was how good of a Daughter she was , not out giving all the local boys her pussy ,that thay just wont to fuck her and dump her ,,that's just the way it is ,,,And Daddy trully loves her ,,,,!!!!! I have to go anonymous or all u goody goodys could talk creap ,,and keep your sh$%#^%in your closet,,
Loved the story! The buildup was a little long, but thats ok. A girl with a plan! I dont have a problem with the dad not spewing a bunch of dialog, actually Im happy with it that way. Most authors spend time writing the father in as a whiny pussy before he finally has sex with her. Good job!
i've been have good times with my daughter going on 15 yrs now since her 20th bday.
I loved the way you worked the lesbian aspect into this story. I was slightly disappointed when you skipped from Dawn and Susan just playing with themselves and only devoted a paragraph to what could have been a truly erotic episode with them having full blown lesbian sex with each other.
However this story was always about Dawn getting her fathers cock inside her cunt and you achieved that in masterful fashion. I would have loved to read a follow up story to see how they carried on their illicit affair.
An excellent story and one I am sure I will revisit on many occasions when I feel the need for sexual gratification.
LOVE IT! Hands down the best daddy daughter story that I've read from the girl's perspective. Amazing :) MORE PLEASE!!!!!!
She finally got her daddy to impregnate her or aren't we supposed to think about that?
This was well written I'll concede that but these details are always conveniently passed over like they don't matter. I'm sure dad will be thinking about that later though.
That was a terrific story! ...the girlfriend seduction was delicious and got me revved up nicely, hehehe, I just wish the further sex with her that was glossed over had a little more page time; it would have been sweet reading about them getting their tongues into each other for the first time!
The daddy scene at the end was just forking* amazing!! So well written and described that you didn't want it to end, just really, really well done! :)
I got a really good kick out of the hug description early in the story:
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Her hugs had become rather frequent. Full-blown full contact full body hugs. Not the embarrassed ‘I don’t want my daddy to feel my breasts’ kind that most teenage girls give their fathers, but the ‘I’m pretending I don’t notice but can you feel my grown up tittys?’ kind.
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I got a good laugh while thinking about it, remembering all the varied hugs Ive gotten over the years, heh!
Thanks for the awesome story, fav author and story buttons clicked! :)
I didnt like it, i only wanted to read a story between his daughter and not involving some more people, there was no warning some girlfriend was gonna be included for those who dont wanna read that, and another part i hated was that the dad almost didnt say anything at all, it was only from her wiew, nothing from the dad how he feel or what so ever with seeing his naked girl, i absolutley hated this and i dont recomend this to anyone!!!
I thought it was well written and brimming with anticipation. Very good. And the ending was nice. Good job overall
I liked it 🔥 I didn't mind the girlfriend in the middle and I was glad she didn't join them at all. Dad could've talk to her more...another page or chapter would have been cool.
Well written, with enormous built-up anticipation of the daughter finally getting her father to fuck her. Good place to end the story, after their first fuck = a sequential episode could never be better/ Thanx for the Read.
WOW... I have never had a vaginal Virgin but have been luck enough to have given 6 Lovely ladies the pleasure of feeling how good anal can be as the build up to the point of penetration is allot longer then normal and almost like this prelude on this story as half of the ladies I was blessed to have initiated into the carnal pleasures were referrals from the others. Just as I am now blessed with a super Hot Sub who enjoys all 3 holes and is wonderful talented and she is on the prowl for a sister slave to share in our life.