you write well but I found the story very depessing. Trudy is too submissive while Jim and Tony are a couple of selfish assholes. That doesn't make for a vey happy story.
60 year old George
Trudy was a lost cause in what should have been a very healthy wife swapping.
The previous comments are true. In swinging/swapping, it is normal to find that one of the partners enjoys it more than the other. And, often the old green-eyed monster, jealousy, creeps in. It is also true that not all experiments at swing work out positively, so in that respect, though the story was somewhat of a downer, that's just the way it happens. A gentle encouragement to lead Trudy to the doorway so she could watch might have helped. Excessive alcohol didn't help; it hindered. Smaller quantity of alcohol and the visual stimulation with gentle touches and caresses might have yield a much more favorable outcome. And, who knows, given time, Trudy may have been the one demanding more partners.
When he realized that Trudy didn't want to take part and was there only as the result of a threat of divorce Jim should have backed right off and kicked that asshole Tony right out of the house. The consent of a drunken person has been widely held not to be consent so Jim is guilty of rape and Tony is an accessory to the crime
The guy knew the wife would not fuck and went into a swinging episode trying to fuck her to fuck and sneaking off with the other woman before she had a chance to say no. Been in the situation with couples like this. First rule of thumb no body swings until all are in agreement to do so. I would beat the shit out of a man that swung with my wife and his wife did not. That is a problem they need to work out before it gets th is far. Over the years have taught many couples to swing and met some couples like this and some the wife wanted to fuck but the guy didnt. Rule is, couples swing, if the couple doesnt swing, no one does. I remember one party the ocuple came in and the husband went back outside and sat in car for the evening while she fucked around in groups. The disaster in the front yard when she went out caused the police to be called. They eventually did what they should have done before, divorced, they were to different in their wants and needs.
We were both wasted and her mini skirt was just revealing her pussy lips if you were sitting down and she was standing up.
All night at the hotels lounge she was drinking like a fish as was I.
She could not walk by herseld and one of them had her right side and I was on her left. He feet were dragging, she was that far gone.
When we headed back to our room, 3 guys followed us and was talking about the fun places to see while se were in Mazatlan.
Her shirt was falling off and one made a bet with me.
"I bet you I can get my wife naked and to your room in 10 minutes"
I had seen his wife earlier and she was smoking hot but she had already headed back to their room.
I said and what if you can, what are you planning?
He said "If I get her over there, can we watch the girls" I knew my wife was out cold so I thought the pics would at least be fun to take.
We got mine to the room with one of their help and we removed all her clothes and laid her down on the bed.
She was beautiful, naked and spread wide open for all to see.
Sure enough, he had one of his buddies go with him to his room and a few minutes later, she was there. Her clothes were dripping off of her and he handed me his wife and said hold her up.
He slid her clothes off and said go for it, do whatever you want as she won't remember it at all the next day.
I slid my hands over hre breasts and he said finger her.
I reached down and felt her up inserting my finger up her pussy.
He said lets put the girls together and see what happens. They were both so out of it I agreed and we put them in position 69 with bothj of their faces in the others pussy.
I fingered his wife pussy and he fingered mine.
They both started to move a bit and started to wake up.
I knew mine would not remember a thing and he said the same so we said "time to eat a pussy" and they both started to eat each other out.
The other two guys that were single were in awe of this sight. 2 hot women wasted drunk eating the other woman out. We put some rum in a shot glass and inserted it in my wife pussy and told his wife to drink up. She suched it up and we we did the same for his wife pussy and my wife spilled half of it but got the other half down after pushing the shot glass inside his wife all the way.
We told her she had to get it out without using her hands so she smashed her face into his wife pussy to get at it.
The door was opened by the 2 other guys and one went to the bar to tell what was going on and next thing there was like 8 guys there all wanting to get a free feel and jerk off.
3 women came into the room and was rubbing themselves, one taking her shirt off until secutiy came by and asked us to stop.
It was like a big eat out session with 20 people falling out of the doorway either half naked or all the way.
He and I stayed to fuck our wives really hard.
We asked the other 2 guys to stay and hold up our girls while we rammed them hard. thye held them by th ebrasts and waist while we rode them for quite a while. We did leave the door open and a few stopped by and watched for a few.
The next day, neither of the girls remembered a thing but had huge hangovers.
We got a lot of free drinks for the remainder of our vacation to Mazatlan.
By incompetent and inept "writer" .
What fun, screwing a comatose woman. What an asshole.
I think I would have been happiest if the couple had told Tony he was and asshole and should fuck off, but sadly they were almost as bad as he was.
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