All Comments on 'Alcoholic Mom'

This sounds like a story close to home. Ryan is the son and Bonnie is the mom. Bonnies son Ryan has a friend also named Ryan. The friend Ryan fucked Bonnie and another friend Tony also fucked Bonnie. She is always drunk. But now she has moved on from the boys and is always out drunk in the bars fucking any guy that will look at her.

tell someone you fucking and who,sharing the one you fucking.writer just don't get it.you go to jail for incest.

This is a great story. Not only does the son fuck his own mother, he lets his friend fuck her too. Good stuff. Very arousing. And each of them squirted her twice. If I could be there, I'd fuck her too. Very hot!

This sucked, and it didn't have to. For me, lousy writing will always kill even the best of plotlines. And this was spectacularly lousy writing.

I've read many of your stories, and I'm sick of giving you the benefit of the doubt. You're a really bad writer, there's no suspense nor tension in your stories, no anxiety, and worst of all, no pleasure.

That would be one dead ex best friend.

I liked it all except the last two lines.