All Comments on 'From A Quiet Housewife To A Slut'

It got me interested then just left me there. I hope there is more coming right away. Make it with the same feelings and passion please.

The story started well, but ended with a fizzle. It is fine to continue a story with additional chapters, but try to write each chapter so it has a bang near the end. After you have done that you can add a teaser to draw the reader to the next chapter.

This left me very flat.

Believe that it is the start of a great story but was stopped prematurely.

I liked the start, and how it developed, even though there could have been more hesitation from the wife to follow through with the "examination". It definitely gets the interest and I hope to see what is to follow. Good job though and definitely exciting.

Plese keep them coming

Why post something so incomplete? I'm guilty of having something on here that didn't go all the way to the end, but this didn't do anything. You write well, em, but you have to finish!

Best true sounding story on Cliterotica

The older comments are a mix. A smatter of applause and frowns. This is SO obviously an intro first part, more than half are redundant. It makes me smile because it grounds in a fairly light heated original sense a lot of fantasies, of a lot of people, male and female. The english is more than ok because it works at this level.

I hope comments did not put you off, or discourage u from turning such 'pen' to other common fantasies... changing room, swimming baths, cinema, train/bus for example. Even hospital bed. Life may have moved on.... S UK

this dont appear to be a story just the beginnings of one so cant comment on it