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yes, there is genius up under your scraps.

I'll be honest, I don't really understand it all, but

it reads well to me. I have a lot to learn and this poem

is a good lesson.

cuts right to the nerve, and then ends with a

"in celebration of monster building ending

let?s dance"

you are 2cool, 2Rivers

cuts right to the nerve, and then ends with a

"in celebration of monster building ending

let?s dance"

you are 2cool, 2Rivers

(I read beauty first) this time with a big stick. A powerful inditement, excellent poem.

jim :)