by PDumbledore
How about the quads and Jack and Brenda share a three or four bedroom place in college? Can't wait until their college nights begin.
I loved this story but it took to long for the guys to hook up. But it was good. I want to see more bi fun in college...maybe convince their parents to join.
liked all of the others but personally didnt like biys getting involved with each other. kinda sounds like you were running out of ideas and situations for them to be in sexually. Dont try for story line to much it will develop on its own when you just put them together. With No. 6 all needed was just another chapter of pure sex between the 4 and nothin else then get the 2 cousins involved
My god man ur a genius. im a bi guy and i loved it at the end where all 3 guys just started to fuck each other mmmmmmmm, awsome touch.;) (drools all over own cock in pleasure)
KEEP WRITING! u are my god!
I think that out of all the chapter this was by far this best please continue.
oh my god, that was so amazing. i loved the guy threesome. i cant wait to play around with my boyfriend.
this whole storie was great dude. i hope to see more and try to get the parents into the fucking >:).
I Loved it your great at Writing only thing is after reading all 6 chapters I am sooo sore now !!! Keep em comeing please
I didn't see the boi on boi thing cumming. Made my pussy twitch, and I never thought two guys (or more) would ever turn me on like that...keep it up ! Your stories are great !
This is definately the best story in the quad series, please can we have more!
dude guy on guy pretty gross but u must make more please lol man this shite is good
Hello,
For some reason I do not see chapter 7. All other chapters are here. May be there is a reason?
Dwight
I didnt' like this chapter just because I'm not into strapons or gay sex. The sex scenes were hot though - just not something I enjoy.
I'm glad you had the guts to allow the guys to explore the bisexual side of sex. If more men would try it, the more they would like it. If whomever made us didn't intend us to be bisexual, they wouldn't have put our genitals in the positions that they are.
It as great except for the guys. Would have liked to have seen the girls doing it to the guys.
Since I am male and homophobic the Guy On Guy (GOG) stuff really turned me off. I wish people would warn readers when they do this!
Loved it all. Girl on girl, guy on guy. Only way to really get it all and enjoy all aspects of sex. Until you do you are not really into sex properly
this series is awsome i usually dont like guy on guy but you make it work great job
I loved it. Finally there is a guy on guy scene but the guy readers freak out. What is wrong with this picture? Why is it that when its girl on girl they are all for it but the guys they freak out? Hmmm be a little more secure. Don’t worry about. Liking it does not make you gay.
i thought that it was a good chapter,the only problem i had was with the guy on guy scene wouldve appreciated some warning(dont get me wrong im not homophobic but the mental imagery makes me a bit uncomfortable)
i thought that it was a good chapter,the only problem i had was with the guy on guy scene wouldve appreciated some warning(dont get me wrong im not homophobic but the mental imagery makes me a bit uncomfortable)
i thought that it was a good chapter,the only problem i had was with the guy on guy scene wouldve appreciated some warning(dont get me wrong im not homophobic but the mental imagery makes me a bit uncomfortable)
if u wanna write guy on guy stories do it in he gay and lesbian section. You runed one of my favorite stories.
You started to go too far with ur characters not everyone in their family is going to have incest. and the whole my mother is my aunt crap gets confusing and isnt necessary to the plot and didnt add a single good thing to your story.
Keep em simple and sexual
I really liked reading this series of stories, and then I get to chapter 6 and there's a bit guy on guy it seems. The whole blowjob thing, I wasn't really okay with it, but I could stand it. And then I skim down a little further, and here you have three guys in one big pile. I don't know, people can say what they want about why I think it's okay for girl on girl action and not guy on guy, but I just thought it was a bit much.
Otherwise, it's a great story, great series, and don't listen to the people who tell you to stop going too deep with characters, it gives the story some background, and more interesting, keep writing. =]
I was estatic with the series until this submission. I'm not bi and I have no interest in reading about a male bisexual/gay encounter. That type of story line turns me off quick. I understand that you've taken the quads, along with Jack and Brenda, through just about every sexual situation imaginable. However, I would just as soon have you end the series rather than see you resorting to the male bisexual encounter in this chapter.
One last road that you haven't traveled is the parents involvement as I suggested in my previous post. After that, I would declare the job well done and end it.
Your talent could very easily find us a new avenue with new characters.
Thank you for your efforts!
dude writer that was not cool guys should have stayed with chicks and chicks going both ways
it was good till now.switch it back
I liked the switch you pulled guy on guy and girl on girl. Brilliant!!!!!!
sorry loved the story was incredible till you went guy on guy that kinda ruined it for me
Good story all around. I hope to see a continuation of this series in the future.
I love the series. I think it actually happens more then we realize and I especially like how the guys got into to sucking cock as I am a married man who loves to suck cock from time to time.
Was pretty hot till the fagget crap... Now air tight....!