by 18months
Clever premise and hotter 'n hell! Would love to see more of this naughty wife!! ;-)
I see so many comments asking why those who post negative comments to loving wives stories read them at all. This is a good example why. Most of us aren't opposed to the genre, just finding the same plot with different character names. This is a creative way of writing such a story and avoiding all of the cliches. Coming up with this twist on the genre took some thinking, some effort, and it shows.
the wife is still just a whore to suck off the cop quite so easily. Any real life husband would just drive of and leave the slut there.
Also quite unrealistic...would agree that the husband
should have dumped her on the spot and left her with
the policeman.
I think its brevity is one of its better assets. An inventive premise, but the author should have developed the couple's dilemma, and not allowed the conflict to be resolved so easily. But I can see a lot of potential for the characters.
A great story; it is an inspiration to my own work. I've listed it as a favorite.
She has been doing this for quite a while. Without a blink of the eye she's sucking off the cop? Then rationalizes it away without any effort or guilt. She has been doing this for years now. The husband is always the last to know. But he now should know but does not care which makes him a WACC.