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Yesterday's Valentine

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by Syndra Lynn03/28/04

Brilliant!

now it reveals them
bright eye-catcher, perpetual movement
telling all who pass
this is the house where someone was careless with love

I will never look at loose balloons in quite the same way. A marker of carelessness. Thanks

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by Anonymous03/28/04

A Wonderful Work

I might only swap out "deflated" for "defeated" . . . or maybe not.

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by Tathagata03/29/04

Very Nice

reminds me of the Tom Waits song " House Where Nobody Lives"
same type of feeling
the balloon analogy was wonderful
Thank you for this

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