All Comments on 'Car'

There's a jazzy, bluesy kind of feel to the rhythm of this poem underlying the urgency of its content that really appealed to me, and I absolutely love the ending! :)

of the sex you submitted. Well written and hot. I can feel the hood beneath my back. ;-)

Teenage sex on a southern summer night told with vivid word pictures. Splayed like a drunken prom queen - soft from necessity - and liquid in the night. Fantastic! Brought back memories. Write some more.

what more is there to say? This has it all.....nicely done!

~Merry

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