by The_Darkness
You seem to be an expert at writing these....based on personal experience? LOL!!
this is the second time I've read this story (I think) and every time I chuckle at the end. most guys wish this could happen to them...their lives being pretty boring with their girlfriends...
anywhoo...no grammatical errors to speak of,and the flow was real enough for me. great job!
One of the few I read all the way to the end even after I came. I liked the beer bottle twist. Nice touch!