All Comments on 'Caught'

Well done!

That was a great story and you are very nice looking woman.

Okay, there were some grammar and punctuation issues, but the story plot itself was extremely hot. The idea that a man catches his wife cheating and uses the occasion to dominate her is very sensual, at least in my opinion. Then, of course, there were several shocks in the story. Yes, I give it a 5.

Very hot story with a surprising twist. Well-done.

scene. Not good to fool your readers this way. I am sorry you ruined what could have been a good story. Every time a man beats a woman like this at her request even, he has to remember this may be the day she is tired of you. Goes to the law and reports you for wife abuse to get rid of you. Safe Sane Consensual, but dont ruin stories by changing the scene at the end. And yeah since she was actually fucking his brother it would appear she is just a cheap hooker.

A little divertissement but lovingly written. Ty. x

I really liked the rough sex, and the big poly joke. I LMAO at the end.

And a dangerous game to play. Not to mention the social disease side note.

OK. Apparently some folks are not aware that this is a work of fiction, and are treating it as realty. With FICTION, it is whatever the writer says, and no more. No less. You, the readers, mind can't ad or delete stuff just to satisfy your inability to separate truth from fiction. NO ONE in a story is going to get pregnant, a disease, or any other thing your critical, puritanical mind wants to insert. IT'S FICTION!!!!!!!!!!!!! CHILL OUT!

NOT NICE i gave it 2

cuck rubbish disguised as macho husband