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by Anonymous

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by tarablackwood2205/16/04

Excellent!

Mature efficiency of language here, as in this poet's other works. Well done.

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by Tathagata05/16/04

"skittered across Utah like drops on a skillet,"

Brilliant.

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by 05/16/04

Great lines

I especially like the one that Tathagata quotedamazing and rich!

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by LeBroz01/23/07

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Sounds like the move East was not a move of joy.

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by LeBroz01/23/07

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Sounds like the move East was not a move of joy.

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