All Comments on 'familiar leather'

....with anticipation....longing. Words that hang on the edge, threatening, but never spill over. Fine work!

You handled this very nicely, WD. It's subtle in its own way, yet still... wickedly exciting. :)

the lines are well trimmed with interesting phrasing, the understated sexuality makes this so erotic. This is the best I have read from you, an excellent erotic poem. The last line is wonderful:

"till her need is painful."

Yes, this is poetry...

jim : )

and absolutely beautiful. Thank You

When ?No? brings

her crashing down

till her need is painful