All Comments on 'Controlling the Apartment Residents Pt. 01'

please finish the storie

What an incredible read. I can not wait for the next posting. Aside from your amazing storyline, you are a good writer. Thanks for sharing.

first of all the guy has a tape of his gf being attacked and doesn't take it? If some guy told me he wouldn't give me the evidence because of some stupid rules I would kick his ass and take it! At least I would go immediately to the cops. They don't need to know anything about the rape, the assault is enough to get the girl in jail. Since the video equipment is there and motion triggered the guy having the tape would be in a world of judicial hell if he destroyed the tape.

And then you leave out the most important parts of the rapes so it isn't even a sexy story, all build up - no release.

so far i enjoy the fact that one woman controlles another I would have liked to know the color and length of the subs hair and more hair pulling to control her