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Dusk's jewels

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by Anonymous

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by jthserra06/06/04

A sparkling look

at sunset. An beautiful observation in metaphor. Very good...


jim : )

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by YDD06/06/04

Dusk's jewels

A common observation nicely drawn.
The colors are all there
and cloud wisps too.
Nature's nightly jewels
abound around Gaia's neck
before the tiara in her hair,
the diamonds nightly in the air.

Please keep writing like this.
Your imagery is very strong.

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by tarablackwood2206/06/04

Nicely...

...done. A pleasure to read!

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by LeBroz11/30/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.



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