this is a very well written story, and grammatically correct. you should definately finish up all 9 of them
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Anonymous06/15/04
Finish All Nine PLEASE!!!!!
Pretty damn good start! Gotta see more & see whatelse happens & whoelse gets involved or if anyone finds out & how they deal with it etc.! So much potential for this & there is definitely too much potential to have this be a single shot edition!
Jim
English
Let's see the rest of the story.
Thisw by no means should be a 1 shot deal. i can't wait to read the rest of the saga. Good job keep it going!!
Keep it going!
Keep this going! I like the idea of the female going after the male...
go south young man!!
Keep it up, baby!
Awesome story
I love the setup - a woman who
know what she wants... Even though
she has to look for it at home :-)
nice start...
hoping to read more..
Estela was a nurotic bitch.
Poor Pip.
good story
great start please write more stories
10 out of ten
this is a very well written story, and grammatically correct. you should definately finish up all 9 of them
Finish All Nine PLEASE!!!!!
Pretty damn good start! Gotta see more & see whatelse happens & whoelse gets involved or if anyone finds out & how they deal with it etc.! So much potential for this & there is definitely too much potential to have this be a single shot edition!
Jim
Don't stop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
At this rate, I'll be having so many cold showers, there won't be a worry about running out of hot water LOL
Definitely continue!!!!!!!
It's not '10 out of 10'...
On 'Literotica', it's '5 out of 5' but I agree with the principle principal!
Cool Stuff
Vividly written, charachters are believable and likable, Jolly good.
Very very
interesting, now I have to read the rest of it...
Randy Randi
A good story that was well written and a real turn on for me. Got me hard.
Nice Story-Erotic and Sensual
Excellent writing especially bringing in the aunt.
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