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Randi Comes Home Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/14/04

Let's see the rest of the story.

Thisw by no means should be a 1 shot deal. i can't wait to read the rest of the saga. Good job keep it going!!

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by Anonymous06/14/04

Keep it going!

Keep this going! I like the idea of the female going after the male...

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by Anonymous06/14/04

go south young man!!

Keep it up, baby!

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by Anonymous06/14/04

Awesome story

I love the setup - a woman who
know what she wants... Even though
she has to look for it at home :-)

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by xander7406/14/04

nice start...

hoping to read more..

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by 06/14/04

Estela was a nurotic bitch.

Poor Pip.

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by Anonymous06/14/04

good story

great start please write more stories

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by Anonymous06/15/04

10 out of ten

this is a very well written story, and grammatically correct. you should definately finish up all 9 of them

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by Anonymous06/15/04

Finish All Nine PLEASE!!!!!

Pretty damn good start! Gotta see more & see whatelse happens & whoelse gets involved or if anyone finds out & how they deal with it etc.! So much potential for this & there is definitely too much potential to have this be a single shot edition!
Jim

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by doormouse06/15/04

Don't stop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

At this rate, I'll be having so many cold showers, there won't be a worry about running out of hot water LOL

Definitely continue!!!!!!!

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by Anonymous06/17/04

It's not '10 out of 10'...

On 'Literotica', it's '5 out of 5' but I agree with the principle principal!

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by Anonymous06/13/05

Cool Stuff

Vividly written, charachters are believable and likable, Jolly good.

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by 11/19/05

Very very

interesting, now I have to read the rest of it...

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by Anonymous08/21/06

Randy Randi

A good story that was well written and a real turn on for me. Got me hard.

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by prop6906/27/08

Nice Story-Erotic and Sensual

Excellent writing especially bringing in the aunt.

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