by SM402
Not very good or very well written the sex was not bad but there was no built up to it... BillyF
Would like to see more about boy playing with Mother and sister's tits.
A good start to a series, and what has been written is very erotic and kinky.
It would be hot to see him become the only man in all of the girl's lives.
title says it all. work on your adverbs.
I love the story but I think there should be many more chapters. You have laid the ground work, now expand the story.