All Comments on 'Family Story'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Worst Story Ever

Pure crap........

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
terrible

this is the worst story i have read this decade.

BillyFBillyFover 17 years ago
Family story

Not very good or very well written the sex was not bad but there was no built up to it... BillyF

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
About Tits

Would like to see more about boy playing with Mother and sister's tits.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good Story

Can't wait to see more of it

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 13 years ago
It's a shame that the author hasn't followed up with this story

A good start to a series, and what has been written is very erotic and kinky.

It would be hot to see him become the only man in all of the girl's lives.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
you said slowly four times in a four sentence paragraph

title says it all. work on your adverbs.

NamelessOne616NamelessOne616almost 10 years ago

Awesome story fantastic

laughdruidlaughdruidover 2 years ago

I love the story but I think there should be many more chapters. You have laid the ground work, now expand the story.

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