All Comments on 'Prose Poem Prolix'

Is it poetry?

Is it not?

Does it matter

which - No

Does it matter

Yes

This is a marvelously complex

beautiful

piece of writing.

The kind that

can/should be

read in small sittings

savored, sucked

for nourishment

and pure joy.

Please remove -30-

very QRK

QRO & QRQ

AN ABSOLUTE MUST READ!

descriptive joy, I would hope that someday my as-of-yet unborn grandkids might find this as assignment in their Literature class, belongs in a Norton if you ask me :) wonderful, cant even choose my favorite part!!

read this, if you enjoy reading at all :)

... in private, and now in public. This is just gorgeous masterful stuff. An absolute masterpiece of language and thought -- perhaps the best thing I have read anywhere, in a long time!!!

if YDD and Tara like it...it must be good.

Seriously, I am left speechless

I wanted it to go on

I wanted to stay there and see and smell and hear all those things over and over

You are a talented man my brother

Thank you for sharing your art here

i've slowly been making my way through the writers here, i picked a good day to come read you. i could have read on..this was brilliant.

this line stood out..

"There are moments like this in all lives; charting the tacks and heels of sailing ships, no matter how ragged the canvas."

i will return, i must!