All Comments on 'The Captured Slave'

While I like the Gor theme, I never liked Norman's writing style, so it's great to read an author who does it steamier and more to my liking! It's a challenge to write this style without sounding corny, but I think you managed!

Obviously this one has not read or seen how a Jarl truely is to base this story on.

A bit on the purple prose side, but captures the feel of Gor well.

As for the comment about "real Jarls", typical teenage gorean wannabe. No where in this story does it suggest it takes place in the North and no where is the word Jarl is used. Really confused about that comment. Erm, no such thing as real Jarls (pronounced Yarl) on earth or Gor.

... do we read about a Hero from earth going medieval on their asses for abducting our women? [DUKE] No one steals our chicks - and lives! [/DUKE]