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My Brother & His Friends

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/30/04

Great

I totally found this story great and if I had a brother wow.

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by Phantom192506/30/04

Waste of time & energy..........

This story was flat-out pathetic............No "personality" to it at all.

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by Anonymous06/30/04

sister pussy is the best

hot story. i first fucked my sister when she was drunk. that was about six months ago and we have been fucking hot and daily ever since. i get an instant boner just thinking about sucking my sister's tits and unloading my cum into her hot wet pussy.

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by sweetness_divine07/01/04

Very little depth to this story

This story wasn't developed fully enough. Group "rape" is already a distasteful idea, but there are ways to make it seem sexy...

The protagonist seemed to be too detached from whatever was going on. For this reason, I didn't really feel like she enjoyed being in relations with her brothers and her friends. Next time, build up to the climax instead of rushing the reader right to it.

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by Anonymous07/01/04

Flat... empty...

Just plain ugh. No style, no personality, no emotion.

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by Anonymous07/02/04

Sisters Do Care About Their Brothers

Hello I enjoyed this story. I use to think it could never happen but the more people i talk to the more i believe and then it happened to me. my sister and I also got drunk and was with some friends and we all got naked and fucked each other. I knew what was going on and she did too.

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by Anonymous07/07/04

read your own story

and fix the errors. Dull and poorly written.

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by scerfer07/08/04

F-The Grammar/Literary Critics....

The essence of your creative thoughts/ideas come across to fans of this genre quite clearly. Pulitzer prize maybe a ways off...but there're more than a few of us that've put food/drink on thetable with much worse pulp! Write 'til your brain locks-up or fingers fall off.....then dictate.

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by Anonymous08/16/06

it's not that bad

not a bad story by any means, a little short with under developed characters but quite well written and fairly hot. I particularly like the thought of sisters using their bodies as deal makers in stories, so would be interested if you had more to share. remember, little boys with limp dicks who slag you off anonomously are not worth worrying about. I am more than happy to leave my name. Jim

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by Anonymous08/24/10

So HOT

That is one amazing story and please add more!

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by Anonymous10/12/12

nice story but it reads as BS sorry

total BS begining seems ok but to go from virgim to gang bang and anal to me is BS

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by Anonymous11/19/13

Fuck

Yummy sounds hot

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by Anonymous04/16/14

wow

another fucking asshole,using he s sister for his drugged mine and some readers even like that,what a PITI,THE WRITER IS A DRUG ADDICT NO GOOD SON OF A BITCH.

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