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Ancient echoes

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by Anonymous

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by Syndra Lynn07/11/04

Beautiful memories!

You have some great phrases here. I love this:

Retire to bed
rest in generations arms
those before you
knew all this too

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by Tathagata07/11/04

a lush poem

full of sights and sounds...
I can imagine it all right down to the smell of furniture wax and the ticking of a grandfather clock
Great job

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Nice work...

....I remember what this looked like at the beginning...you did an incredible job letting it ripen and making it as strong as it is.

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by fawnie07/11/04

ahhhhh

i'm too young for the good old days, but this brings back memories of squeeky stairs. lol
enjoyable and well constructed poetry.

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by 07/11/04

Beauty...

much enjoyed, the phrasing is really superb. Thank you!

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by echoes_s07/18/04

Absolutely beautiful

You described this so vividly, bringing out smiles and warnings, nostalgic and heartwarming. Thank you.

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by LeBroz10/30/06

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Multi-generational celebration
Celebrated here;
It's like at Christmas &
To Grandmother's house we go.

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by LeBroz01/02/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.



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by duddle14601/27/07

evocative

Reminescent of times past ~ made more clear by the beautiful metaphorical references.

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by duddle14601/27/07

evocative

Reminescent of times past ~ made more clear by the beautiful metaphorical references.

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