All Comments on 'Amante VII (Hypersonnet)'

I now long for my own Amante.

How perfect is that line??

each poem amazes me more and more...and each one throws me into a meditation that lasts for some minutes

on how rich and beautiful and languid these words flow, and what sweet whispered emotions they carry.

muy bueno

muchos gracias

I love the latina in youuuu. This poem has a lot of vida *grin* I missed the forms, structural breaks, and only a few points really flow. I think your iambic pentameter needs work too, but if I ignore the hypersonnet part, it's a good poem.

Ok, I'm going to be picky here, because it was form you chose to use. The iambic pentameter was dead on, but sometimes it was off a bit, and others it was inverted.

If it wasn't a hypersonnet, I would love this poem with it's bilingual flair is faboo.

and reads like the succulent love poem that it is meant to be. terrific series, Eleanora ;)

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,500 poems.

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