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by Anonymous

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by tarablackwood2207/15/04

Good....

...job on a subject where it would be very easy to sound like nothing more than a schoolboy who suddenly thinks he discovered profound thought. You keep that in check and speak with maturity and real human emotion without dipping into cliche or sophmoric fervor.

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by perks07/15/04

perkspective

depends how it ends and who writes history who the villain is. I'm not supportive of your subject matter, and I don't think it was well written. It feels like a lecture instead of a drawing of the reader into your emotion. It makes me feel defensive and angry. I think possibly we don't share the same views on politics. Either that, or I've sorely misunderstood you.

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by normal jean07/16/04

I think

that the subject matter is controversial but everyone should have some opinion and the courage to speak without fear of ridicule. I saw this on the passion thread and was hoping you would submit it. I was just curious to see the reactions you might get. I posted one like this a while back and received very mixed and some outright angry FB.

I did enjoy this poem, although some of the points youve made are sad and disturbing and probably much too true to be ignored or brushed off. I hope you are a registered voter :D

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by LeBroz12/20/06

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Strong opinions, a bit didactic
With conclusions offered as fact;
May disagree but one fact remains
We must forever be ever vigilant.

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by duddle14601/25/07

timely

Who was it who said, "Eternal vigilance is the price of peace." Very timely piece.

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by Amyfriend01/28/07

A little...

lesson in Economics 101....your words have a ring of truth

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