All Comments on 'A Knight's Tale'

Chaucer popped into my head.

I think if you tried this without rhyme, it would read so much better. The rhythm is off in a few stanzas.

A good poem that could be reworked a little and really improved.

*no thermometer rating

I enjoyed your poem, and I like how it rhymes but than I like poems that rhyme, Its an awesome poem.

Dakota

Seconding what the wicked lady had to offer

Rhythm and rhyme here seem to suffer

One against the other;

Concentrate of the rhythm (meter)

The rhyme matters far less;

Tweak it, play with it, it'll come out far better.

A knight ever seeking is blown off course as human events unfold ~ awakening at the dawn he hears her voice and continues his journey.

of quests and dragon slayings, TK U MLJ LV NV