by Eleanora Day
It took me a few reads to come to terms with the change in passion and tone here.
I like it, of course, and it gives the charecters depth and earthiness that is needed for a string of poems.
A brave new step, another dimension, and, amazingly, my feeling of catching a woman whom I have always thought as rather vanilla,being greedy and lustful in bed.
That is amazing writing and shows what kind of connection you have with your readers
each Amante poem delights and pulls me in deeper
Thank you
weren't you? huh?
:)
*No longer using the thermometer.
....and the altered tone and content from the others provide a startling backdrop for the beautiful phrasing.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.
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