by matriarch
Finished PRETENDING to be a writer, I mean?
Leave writing to people who can grasp the nuances of voice and grammar. Stick to reading your gothic romances, please?
i loved this... hell, i'd do the ironing everyday if thats what i got whilst doing it.. thanku xxx
I don't know of any other writer who can take just an ordinary domestic scene and turn it into such sensuous and captivating erotica. Well done for daring to be different and doing a bloody good job of it. It's almost made me want to take up ironing. Almost - but not quite! ;-)
Hell, wheres the iron? great job, mat. i have a feeling well be seeing more and more of you here.
*hugs*
Wonderfully erotic. You have a style that is definitely your own. I'll be delighted to help with with any and all houisehold chores. Patti
I love it, Mat, simply love it! Sweetly teasing into hot and erotic, I read it with my pulse pounding. Wonderful.
Okay, the whole story was wonderful, but I think the last two lines is what did it for me. So wonderful to have the scarves pulled over your eyes as it were, no? Trick or treat, even. If you ever were able to catch me *wink*, I might just be willing to interrupt your ironing for a bit.
~lucky
Excellent as usual. Well thought out and well written. As with all your works, as much about the love as about the sex. Few write caring, loving erotica with the flare you do.
As to the early comment by that balless wonder we call annon, what can you say? You write stories that speak to the heart and he struggles not to tax his vocabulary and authorly skills with his feedbacks.
Remember the golden rule, those who can Do, those who can't become critics.
-Colly
You deserve every accolade, and more. Your words echo a very deep, and warm love that resides within you.
mismused
Even for this straight guy, the story was refreshingly gentle, loving and erotic...can't imagine it possibly being written any better!
...but find it so hard to read it and yet found this one so erotic in, as the previous reader wrote, a gentle way. I think ironing has just become a new area of eroticism. I sit down to iron so not so easy to do what she was doing in reality but my mind can have permission to wander like a pair of soft and gentle hands....sofi xxx