All Comments on 'Free Street Bar Scene, 1970'

just a tad before my time but I certainly visited this place a few times after then.

~tiled floors and

boozing bitches sucking lifeblood

through needledink straws

cherries popping in their

lips ~

remember the girls who'd tie a cherry stem in a knot with their tongues??

There was no tease greater than that when I was young.

Thank you for this, I'm always happy to hit a bar full of memories and you brought back a few beauties.

You're dating yourself

"quarters clunking through music machines

setting the changer in motion

and lies spin in rpms"

liked this line

"boozing bitches sucking lifeblood

through needledink straws"

basically loved this, so good, forgave you for "nirvana"

"nightfall they passout

legs quivering apart

smiles plastered askew

whiskey nirvana threatening"

looks like this came from words to avoid thread, ha. ha.

did quite nicely, where the fuck is my thermometer...

I won't tell ya how old I was in '70, but this is so me. Thanks for the trip!

Ahhhh — the bar scene. Partying was always great, the babes were always beautiful {especially at 4am}, and the sex was fantastic.

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