...to not resist the "Reflecting reflexes" line. It sounded hollow compared to the music in the rest of the piece.
agree with jd
the last 5 lines are perfect.
Well done! Thanks for playing!
I felt that I was reading my own lunar life here and
then realized it was Monday - i always feel like shit
on Monday. I liked the it read and what I saw.
the old man as he struggles to keep control. In the wild, the wisdom in the grey of your whiskers means much less than the ache of arthritis in your bones. Poor old wolf.
The alpha is dead! Long live the alpha!
you're pretty vibrant for an old fart!! ~winks~
does this aching wisdom make me so hot? This turns me on. really
A certain haunting melancholy seems to pervade here.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.
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