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by tungtied2u

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews

sandspikesandspikeover 19 years ago
we tend to forget....

what "little" fears others have and zoom in on our own.

This poem reads smoothly like all of your work. The lesson

is one I needed today.

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
School bus savior

wonderful metaphor!

PatCarringtonPatCarringtonover 19 years ago
nicely done

i think this is clearly the best of your three poems today / it reads very well from first to last line /

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
Clear Terror

Strong images here

oft times not seen

until it's too late.

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