All Comments on 'Our Song'

...but never sat down to write. I like what you did with it. In reading it, however, I wonder if you even need the third verse... though not explicit, it seems inherent in the little victory dance in the window above. (Just wondering).

Nice job.

Nice work, Belegon. I have heard these betraying radios before! Thanks.

is mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

Clever use of stiff words, Belegon. I agree with JD4G-- the title and the third stanza are a little redundant; you could probably do with one or the other.

that's what's called for.....enjoyed it.

well, many hearts apparently, and hearts, which in turn, corrupt many good songs. I enjoyed your corpse entry. Thanks.

I hate it when they play that damned song,but I loved the words you wrote. So very well put!

I hate it when they play that damned song,but I loved the words you wrote. So very well put!