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rexfelisrexfelisover 19 years ago
Yum!

I really enjoyed that. I'm a redhead lover, and I have enjoyed this fantasy myself a few times. Especially the ending. :) The only thing I'd have done different would be to have walked over and introduced myself...

Sensuous StorytellerSensuous Storytelleralmost 19 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you for your comment on my story.

It is one of my earlier pieces and each time I write I do hope I get a little better.

I see your view about how to end it, but I did want to leave you to your imagination.

Please check out my other stories and vote, submit another comment or e-mail me.. I appreciate it all.

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It's been over 20 years since I have written many of these stories. I love coming back to see if new readers are stopping by. All comments are welcome.... Thank you for reading my stories. Readers are a writer's dream come true. -Misty-