All Comments on 'Jack Be Nimble: 1997 Appetizer'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I hate you...-.-

Truly, absolutely amazing. Nicely sardonic, condescending, amusing. Jack is absolutely charming, in a pyschopathic way, and does "the dance of effortless fucking superiority" (quoting a HP fanfic writer there) over any of the erotic horror I've read recently. Including my own. *sobs* Ah well, that's why we writer's read isn't it? To spur ourselves on to new heights (or depths, as the case may be). A truly delicious read, and I've linked a dozen people already, most of whom now want to kill me for the nightmares to come. Congratulations on an absolutely wonderful piece of work.

MunachiMunachiabout 18 years ago
great story!

Made me have scary dreams last night... but then, scary dreams can be fun...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Wow.

I have to say, this has been my favorite story that I have read on here. It's nice to find a story that is intelligently written without being dry or boring. Nice.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Did ebay exist in 1997?

Great story. One thing: You refer to buying something off eBay but it is 1997. Not sure but pretty sure EBay didn't exist till after 2000

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