All Comments on 'The Moment'

...is a good title, (hint, hint). Though I liked this, I found myself tinkering with order, repetition, and line breaks.

That a poem makes me do this, is good. It's an evocative graphic, L&F!

(As I did tinker a bit, I'll send that to you elsewhere).

are better than mine

The illustration was self explanatory. That moment just before the first kiss. Words whispered softly touching the pulse of sensual love. Lovely rendering.

That moment when time seems to slow to a crawl and all the world's watching.

or a term in bowling. TK U MLJ LV NV