All Comments on 'The Sheik & the Slave Ch. 08'

Very well done story i must go back and read the rest!

more more more!!!

The beginning seemed a bit forced but the rest flowed well. I hope that you won't lose your desire to continue this story because I personally, and no doubt many others, love the writing in the story as well as the characters.

going back to before she left the tent with a detailing of how it happened was perfect!! oh and the twist with the brother! wonderful! I'm so glad you decided to write more on this one, I love this story. Even though I want to say hurry and write more just wait til you want to write again. But you wrote wonderfully for not being in the mood to write! thank you again!!!

This has been a great story! I can't wait for the reunion!

MY GOD! The ending scene just raised the ante for everyone. Please write more. This is a really good and it deserves a full ending. After I read the first part to "The Sheik and the Slave," I stuck your page in my favorites to constantly check to see that you wrote more. I can see myself doing more of this. PLEASE WRITE MORE!

this is such a wonderful story. please continue it. i think it's fair to say that you've got us all hooked now. don't torture us for too long.

When are we going to get the next installment???

The best i have read, please give as an ending to remenber.

i've been following the whole series and it's the best one yet. hope you will either continue it if you feel like writing more and in doing, so bringing a greater fantasy into my life, or end it if you don't feel like writing more of it. i love your works