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LilDarlinLilDarlinover 19 years ago
~Falling~

Think sometimes we all feel like falling, or that we have already fallen.. Loved this poem.. Makes one think... Thats what we are here for right.. You drew a wonderful picture with your words.. Talent you def. have.Thanks for the lesson in imagery and flow, was great~~

Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
it is okay

to fall, just aim for a soft landing, and never forget to look up at the sky while you're there, on your back, feeling down..i really enjoyed this poem :)

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