All Comments on 'Cardiac Infectious:'

Passion played

so well

I like the organization of this.

I have to say it was tough to pick, maybe 2 and 6, as what was best.

The only thing I would change here is I

and II and III...have you considered Roman numerals for this?

The Roman numeral suggestion is a good'un! Thanks 1201!

I just do not know what to say. This is haunting and so powerful, this part struck me especially, it resonated-

Blind screams echo back

echo back to me

echo back

"I have learned fear."

havent we all...

has been mentioned in Fridays review

what a great poem! I loved the "chapter" structure, which evokes a scriptural style.

Just joining in on the chorus to say that this is an excellent poece of poetry. Strong, complete, instant and perfectly paced.

Such spirituality leasves the soul a desolate void.

Such spirituality leaves the soul a desolate void.

borne thru the centuries and remembered, TK U MLJ LV NV