All Comments on 'Stall'

has been mentioned in fridays review

individually original..hehehe

your thought process is unique~

I actually looked up the word "albatrose" in the dictionary until I realized you must mean "albatross". With the exception of that tiny typo, I thought this was quite powerful, and look forward to reading more of your poems in the future!

didn't detect the form. Very smooth read. I like. I like. :)

agree with eve, words maybe not hurt by the form, it does read a little fast for the title.

I like this, two questions in one line, shouldn't do, shouldn't do, some say; fuck 'em its good.

"Venial, am I? Is that what they said?"