All Comments on 'Wedding Video'

This was an interesting story - but it was a bit hard to follow who was doing what with the video

All became clear, of course - but then the ending was a bit lame

Penny could have suggested - implicitly or explicitly - that she'd like to try some of those positions with her son in law -

I could not follow it. sorry

I can understand his mother-in-law asking him to obtain an x-rated videotape for the weekend, since it's possible she might be recognised going into an adult store, but the idea that she'd wander around naked in front of him just doesn't hold water (unless she's a naturist, which isn't mentioned anywhere in the story). Can I suggest that you run the text past one of the volunteer editors next time?

Sorry, but I meant to give this just 25%, at least partly because the narrative is somewhat incoherent.