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Birthing hope

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by flyguy6912/16/04

I've already told you

how much I liked this one, tt.

A thought; this one seems to cry out for structural experimentation. I wonder how it would read if you played with line length and position a little.

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by Seeker n Finder12/16/04

Wonderful

You found a way to exprss one of lifes most precious moments. This is a gem.

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by Seeker n Finder12/16/04

Wonderful

You found a way to exprss one of lifes most precious moments. This is a gem.

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by Liar12/16/04

You're reviewed

This poem is mentioned in the New Poems thread at the forum.

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by LeBroz12/01/06

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An unusual piece best read several times to savor the play with words.

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by duddle14602/10/07

success

The Power of positive thinking ~ is alive and well.

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by LeBroz03/03/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.



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by tazz31707/26/12

SHOUD BE PAGE 1 OF THE HANDBOOK

for hope and willing. TK U MLJ LV NV

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