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Great Start
Great Start!! Anxious for the next chapter. I appreciate the genre and understand your rant.
another good start
Great start to a new story.
I see you havealready published this at other sites; so I expectwe won't have to wait long for the other instalments.
Can't wait till you write more!
Thank Eros for Peter! Why do people complain about well written stories in a genre that doesn't turn them on? I wouldn't bother objecting to the 4 millionth story of the "she begged for it, I slammed it home" genre, after all. Keep up the great work, Peter!
Thanks for Your Comments
Thank you for you beginning comments. If people don't like the genre, please don't complain about it - just don't read it! A great story so far, keep it up.
disagree
At your suggestion , I have not read your story because I dislike the genre. I only comment to disagree with your preamble indicating that 'MANY people like this kind of story and find it exciting. At age 60, I know many people and do not know of one who finds this genre exciting or erotic. Obviously we know different people . I would only suggest that your preable state that "many of the people I know" like this kind of story, without any disclaimer that many other people despise this kind of story. Thanks for the opportunity to comment. 60 year old George
Great story
A wonderful story. Please keep them coming. Thanks.
A great premise
Many of us do love the genre and love reading about it
Lots of suspence
A really fine start. I can't wait to read the series. Keep writing and don't let THEM get you down.
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