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Your poem is mentioned in the New Poems thread.

Such a graceful dance.

it took me so long to read this

holidays and all

but, as with the others, it is a whisper, on the edge on sleep, that lulls me into dreams of splendor and peace and bottomless love and tenderness.

My favorite verse:

~I see them in your eyes. I dream you. Our night

is hush and sigh, our secrets big as sky. Recline

Amante, here in one thousand points of light,~

Our night is hush and sigh

I love that

muy bueno mi querida

Gracias

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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